My First Candy

Topic: The candy floss is best candy in the world.

Three supporting ideas:

1.      Candy floss is the sweetest candy I have never test before.

2.      Candy floss is the biggest I have ever seen.

3.      Candy floss makes my whole family happy.

My First Candy

    Everybody eat candies in the life. In particular, children love more all kind of candies. I remember why the candy floss left a deep impression on me. I got it form a stranger. It was really sweet and the biggest, very soft and fluffy candy I never seen before. It makes my family very happy.

  My uncle was a soldier who came from a big city when I was five years old. One day, he stood in front of me holding a stick with cotton ball. I didn’t know this person before and why he took a group of cotton and laugh with me? My mom explained to me, but I still couldn’t call him uncle. He said that the cotton was eatable and sweet. I couldn’t believe it. My uncle picked a small of piece cotton off and ate by himself. After several persuasive, I tried a little bit nervously. Surprise! It wasn’t cotton ball. It was really sweet. After than, I took the candy floss, and my uncle hold me. He told me candy floss that how to made it. We ate it together and play together. My family member was laughed. I love candy floss that gave me sweet and fun!